My first poetic endeavor... possibly ever, unless you count grade
school. It actually came quite easily once I sat down and quietly
contemplated what's going on in our life right now.
We dance around it
The elephant in the room--
Invisibly ill.
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December 15, 2007
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oh my yes it did.. i love it,, there is so much room for interpretation!!! bravo!!!
Posted by: paisley | December 15, 2007 at 07:53 PM
Your poem has several layers and not many words. Great write!
Posted by: Tumblewords | December 15, 2007 at 10:26 PM
that's excellent, many interpretations too.
Posted by: Crafty Green Poet | December 16, 2007 at 09:09 AM
i have goosebumps. and i feed my elephant peanuts until i figure out what it is she wants. :)
Posted by: heather kathleen | December 16, 2007 at 09:23 AM
I've said it before, and I'll say it again....
you are GOOD!
Posted by: bluelikethesky | December 16, 2007 at 11:51 AM
Oh my! The mind can go many places with this! Perfect!!!
Posted by: menopauseprincess | December 16, 2007 at 02:42 PM
good poem. keep it up.
Posted by: sister AE | December 16, 2007 at 03:41 PM
This is my first visit to your blog. And for someone who enjoys poetry and reads a lot of it, I was glad to read this. I relate to it and I like the art of it.
Posted by: susan | December 16, 2007 at 06:52 PM
few words tell many untold stories ... perfectly ...
Posted by: littlewing | December 17, 2007 at 04:44 PM